I was given this flyer not too long ago. There are some mistakes. Can you spot the mistakes? No prizes for guessing the right answers, sorry 
Using English incorrectly in advertisements may not be appealing to customers. It shows the lack of professionalism.
Yup, you’ve got all that correct, Bananaz. Hmm, somehow you’re the only one who responded; I guess you’re faster than the other visitors 
Enjoy the new week!
Hi Bananaz,
Yes, you’re right. You’ve spotted two mistakes. However, there are still mistakes elsewhere 
Just a thought, perhaps it’s better to say: Newly imported state-of-the-art equipment.
*Newly imported High-end equipment
*Free Trial on 16, 17 & 18 Nov 2009
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