Comments on: Thesis Statement http://wat4english.com/index.php/2009/07/19/thesis-statement/ Things to Know About English Language Thu, 02 Sep 2010 21:57:14 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.0 By: Kevin http://wat4english.com/index.php/2009/07/19/thesis-statement/comment-page-1/#comment-628 Kevin Mon, 12 Apr 2010 00:42:45 +0000 http://wat4english.com/?p=571#comment-628 Hi, sorry for the delay in replying. You need to start the introduction by giving an overview of how handphones are used. You also need to state that handphones are both good and bad. "Handphones are as common as television nowadays. In fact, they are so important that many users find them to be indispensable... <strong>There are advantages and disadvantages of using handphones</strong>." Take note: I find it odd that the topic contains both advantages and disadvantages, but if you're writing more than the standard FIVE-paragraph essay, then it's alright. If you're required to write only five paragraphs, then the topic needs to be amended so that you choose either the advantages or the disadvantages. Good luck :) Hi, sorry for the delay in replying. You need to start the introduction by giving an overview of how handphones are used. You also need to state that handphones are both good and bad.

“Handphones are as common as television nowadays. In fact, they are so important that many users find them to be indispensable… There are advantages and disadvantages of using handphones.”

Take note: I find it odd that the topic contains both advantages and disadvantages, but if you’re writing more than the standard FIVE-paragraph essay, then it’s alright. If you’re required to write only five paragraphs, then the topic needs to be amended so that you choose either the advantages or the disadvantages.

Good luck :)

]]> By: Joo http://wat4english.com/index.php/2009/07/19/thesis-statement/comment-page-1/#comment-623 Joo Thu, 08 Apr 2010 13:31:26 +0000 http://wat4english.com/?p=571#comment-623 how about if the essay topic is the advantages and disadvantages of handphones?how can i write this thesis statement? how about if the essay topic is the advantages and disadvantages of handphones?how can i write this thesis statement?

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